Candle In The Wind Comments

Very touching poem. None can answer to child's innocent cries.

Great write. Enjoy reading.

Heart wrenching. Very powerful.

Terrific poem! Very touching.

Tenderly touching my heart with grief and sorrow for this little one in pain. Very poignant poem, fantastic imagery, underlying feelings and emotions are intense and move the poem's rhythm from the mind to the heart. You are an excellent writer of poetry! Thank you for sharing it! RoseAnn

a well written story with great imagery.

A brief composition with well-built imagery...a picture in words.

Indeed touching poem, i think words are not enough to show the beauty of your artistic feature...am almost crying

really a vary heart touching story...

Beautiful...comes up a little bit

Whao! Ur lines can fuel d dreams of twenty-five million readers, grt work there.

Whao! Nw isn't dt awesome! Lv how u tel abt every detail.

I love it! ! ! ! :) The airy mood, you did a fine job!

i love it, , touched me [3

Heartbreaking poem. Filled with sadness that i couldnt stop my body from shivering. Wondering what happened next.

This is much different from typical Gulsherian. I have no right to rate this piece and comment for it what I can do read it as many times as I can till my heartbeats get to normal. Tears dear tears you brought I could not see the words correctly. the light in the room mingled with my tears and I have to dry my eyes again and again. No one knows why but I know. I have said this once Why me Allah. I loved this Gulsher. I am already a fan of your artistic ability and the way you choose your words and then arrange them in such a way that the reader is enchanted. A fantastic Narrative poem that has the power of an Epic

Very sad and poignant write.

your composition shows you get one with the characters you describe and write about!

Dear John, Salam Been touching your lines, and my inner self is not satiated yet, for the anticipation is not filled yet. Kindly revise this piece of poesy for me. You can make it a wonderfully appealing one. I request you to give another attempt after yourself reading those lines closely, analytically. To submit you a garland of appreciation is all in there, but thats not what i crave to know from you. Your craft of incarnating Medusa is still in the very lines of brain! That expectation is still bright. with great regards, and your eyes and comments on my 'the time Tree' is very much expected. rgds. taj shah

Hats off to you for your brilliant execution of such literary pieces and your consistent contribution on such human phases filled with the moisture of love and care will surely be speaking for your graded writing talent.