Candle In The Wind Comments

Ppain and heart ache thru the poem some days we wish indeed..very nice to read the candle in the wind...regards

Great poem. I liked the tone and the flow of the poem.Thanks

Great! ! ! Great poem David, but u tone is kinda 'down' but really nice.

Excellent poem, David! Your control of tone is great... great imagery and depth of thought. Wonderful! Steve

You have so elegantly narrated pain and sufferings that occur out of separation from our beloved. The pain is such that the one who endures only he/she can feel.. This poem of yours touches the heart to the core. Really gr8 work by you..Keep it up.