Friday, November 11, 2005

Candle In The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just like a candle in the wind
So does our life at sometime have to end
Many ideas are thrown in the air
Just because no one seemed to care
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jeanne harmon
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***** ********* 11 November 2005

Hi Jeanne, The are a couple of typos to sort out, but this is a good universal poem, of our fear of life journey. The hurrying, the search, when all the time, it's right in front of us. 9 from Tai with her eyes wide open.

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