Sunday, December 28, 2008

Candle In The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

She limped at the gates,
' Who goes there? '
Said I, voice clear and loud
'Mother earth' muttered
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Reshma Ramesh
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Blue Eyes 05 January 2009

i love the imagery and metaphores u have a real talent.

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Linda Moore 01 January 2009

Imaginative and creative, Mother Earth concerns us all, very well written....10

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Moushumi moushumi 31 December 2008

Hi, Words are undulating while depicting the chapter. As mother earth shares with full beat. nice to read.10*** I welcome you to my page. Happy New Year

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Sadiqullah Khan 30 December 2008

Very nice personification, , reshma you write well, , a 10

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Vaibhav Pandey 29 December 2008

awesome really.........

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Michael Gale 28 December 2008

Great poem! I liked it very much! God bless all poets-MJG.

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Seema Aarella 28 December 2008

earth is getting sabotaged beyond repair....something has to be done before it is too late...a timely write!

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Mamta Agarwal 28 December 2008

this is heart wrenching, mother earth desecrated by her own- what can be more tragic- lovely wrire.10 happy new year Mamta

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Kris Smith 28 December 2008

That was beautiful my friend and a lesson to us all thnk you my new found friend Chris 10 +++

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very nice poem that catches the title well, good piece :)

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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