Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Candle Comments

Rating: 5.0

...................I am the candle...........................
................Burned near the grave........................
..............This is not what I wanted......................
.............Where nobody is around to see...................
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 07 December 2016

Captivating and imaginative, Asimji you write meaningful poems.

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Mihaela Pirjol 07 December 2016

A conceptual creative writing, lovely to envision.

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Nosheen Irfan 07 December 2016

A beautiful allegorical write. Profound verses. A life of sacrifice is not an easy one. A super 10.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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