Wednesday, June 18, 2008
Candle Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I am a candle
Burning bright
Beneath lovers lips
Blown out at night
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Sandra Fowler
22 May 2009
An extraordinary use of metaphor. In the flickering light of the candle, I can sense your inner cry. Beautiful. Kind regards, Sandra
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7/29/2025 10:50:40 PM # 1.0.0
The candle - another metaphor that fits so perfectly into my yogic sensibility. Candle light burns like no other. The mystery of its softness is a perfect canvass for lovers and mystics alike. You share something deep within you in this elegy and leave the reader with a sense of wistfulness that lingers. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥