Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Candela Comments

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You go about the business of your life
Gulping great gusts of air
Emitting an exquisite light,
Lovely luminary.
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Callie Carroll
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You definitely have an imaginative name....your study of the candle flame, scientificly explained was very intersting, too.A ten and wonderful poetry.

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Bernard Ceasar 14 September 2008

Wow-almost speechless! You are where I am striving to be poetically! Stay focused and keep this up!

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Colin Jeffery 13 July 2008

Real poetry from the soul.

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Bill Thomas 10 July 2008

This poem is one that will repay long & careful study, rolling the words around the mouth & the ideas round the spirit... thank you.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 27 April 2008

Eclipses are always scenic wonderment - but we, the parent suns, remain a steady light source forever! A beautiful analogy none-the-less. Rgds, Ivan

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Jerry Hughes 17 April 2008

What a throughly superb poem, thank you Calli...

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Robert Rorabeck 30 March 2008

Nice poem, and thanks for your comment on mine....

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