You go about the business of your life
Gulping great gusts of air
Emitting an exquisite light,
Lovely luminary.
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Wow-almost speechless! You are where I am striving to be poetically! Stay focused and keep this up!
This poem is one that will repay long & careful study, rolling the words around the mouth & the ideas round the spirit... thank you.
Eclipses are always scenic wonderment - but we, the parent suns, remain a steady light source forever! A beautiful analogy none-the-less. Rgds, Ivan
You definitely have an imaginative name....your study of the candle flame, scientificly explained was very intersting, too.A ten and wonderful poetry.