Life, here hangs on a filmy thread of hope
Unskilled acrobats, making tight rope walks
With the deep chasm gaping below
Some too fatigued to feel the stress,
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Burnt hopes and dreams. Sad note. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem, inspiring me to write a poem on CCU where I reminded a few days after a heart attack.
Full of emotions very poignantly and successfully put down to arouse a heart-felt feeling for the suffering souls Valsa.......a very phenomenal composition......10/10
A sad but very real situation. Deaths door is always opened it never closes for even a second. Always beckoning someone into its depth of darkness and despair. A slow death from cancer is very emotional. Maybe a cure will be found soon to eradicate its devastating effects. Hopefully it will happen in our lifetime Valsa. You described the situation with tenderness of mind and heart. My thanks to you for a touching write of the human condition.
capturing the human conditions like this with words is meritorious...
So touching that I recollected a few more faces sharpened with intense pain beyond any description. The survivors are fortunate enough.In the dark chambers of loneliness and hopelessness, can we ever see the torch bearers of medical science to show a way out? A poem that matters a lot to us.
Very touching. Agony beyond words and yet you have described it so very effectively Can I seek your views on my poem 'Cry of a soul'.
Very sad, a bit dark but it is true....cancer is better to be a zodiak than an illness...never mind for those who fight for life, dont surrender till we show that we own our life, stay with Him! _Soul
a good picture of a sorry state of affairs..well penned..a new angle of writing..keep it up
A Cancer Patients Last Wish DO READ ALIVE INCIDENCE I OBSERVED UR IS GREAT