Sunday, December 30, 2007

Cancer Ii Comments

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I often wonder will I be one of the lucky ones
To be given a new reprieve on life...
Given a second chance to appreciate
All the things in life I have taken for granted.
...
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Mary Wismer
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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008

Some of the finest poetry is inspired by fearful outcomes and pain. This poem is a testament to the power of the dark side to become a beautiful poetic muse. '... I weep in joy, I dance among the stars, I long for the beauty of the waves of the ocean to return to me. Pulsing over and over me in ecstatic abandon. My blood remembering the feel of life; the Heavens exploding above my Head. The stars shooting, falling for Just us. You have found the ecstatic in the midst of darkness. Your light shines. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fred Babbin 09 January 2008

No one can give you advice now. but your poetry is good. Keep writing.

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Sim Dan 02 January 2008

Hold on to the hope Mary and let God do according to His wish. Lets pray and wait.

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