Cancer blooms in the corporeal garden
Slow, dreamlike, insistent
Not advertising its next appearance
Choosing at will among the garden’s delights.
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Poetry is such a magic art - it can transform the reality. As if we see the things through transparent diamonds with many angles. The scary things become illusive...like in this poem...
Gosh this is a candid write, it takes courage to write something so bold. And yet they say, 'keep your enemies closer', I guess that's the theme here, be not afraid put face it head-on. I like the positivity in this, a fabulous measure of a strong character. HG: -) xx
Interesting concept here, Frank - like the prisoner who ends up befriending the criminal holding them captive. We are capable of so much more strength than we know, even in the face of adversity. Brilliantly written, and deeply expressed. Linda
Your a very strong person Frank. You are not afraid. This takes courage. Excellent poem with good imagery and emotions.
Very nicely done. You relate cancer almost to a symbiotic relationship...where each part needs each other. This is an interesting view of life. Then on the other hand...this might have been an actual relationship...which seems like a cancer to you. Very deep thinking Frank. Well done! Hugs, Dee
Deep and insightful. The resignation to ones fate, the rationailty even when helpless. Never thought of it this way. I am able to feel the pain, anguish, determination, courage, the dread and hope even without having suffered such... all in one poem!
This poem shows a great strength of character, it is full of so many emotions, and a very positive attitude, I hope this saw you through it, Best wishes Lynda xx