Thursday, January 7, 2016

Cancer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blackness don't take my mother
Darkness let her be
It isn't enough she gave me life?
Instead of her take me!
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Daniel Beaird
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Pranayee Gupta Rachamalla 10 January 2016

excellent poem....though it has less words! your each word expressed many emotions......i could feel them! thanks for sharing such a nice poem.....

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Ann Beard 08 January 2016

Excellent poem, said it all with just a few well placed words. Felt every one of them. Thank you

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Dan Beaird 08 January 2016

Thanks Ann, I like your last name :)

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Spock The Vegan 07 January 2016

Touching poem. I lost my mother to cancer. I had a poem about it, but I pulled it out of poemHunter. May you receive the best of God's blessings.

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Dan Beaird 07 January 2016

I wish I could read your poem

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