Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Cancer Comments

Rating: 5.0

he went to the doctor because of
a pain in his chest.
they gave him a physical and ran every test.
the doctor told him:
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 October 2009

Giving up is psychic cancer. Poet didn’t give up, made thumbs down to cancer. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comment on my poem. Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Sandra Fowler 05 June 2009

Written with passion. One can only hope that your warning will be heeded. There is really only today. It pays to be aware of tomorrow.10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 June 2009

Hmmm..........life is uncertain.......................only death is uncertain..........A Good Write

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 June 2009

Very emotional write. Felt its each word deeply. Well penned.

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i lost my dad a few month's back..he had a different cancer.not the lung...he was 73...infact he died not able to withstand the chemo therapy treatment...you have told a sad story and very naturally...please read my 'the chemo therapy' 'losing a baby'

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Christine Kerr 02 June 2009

Very interesting Louis, This poem will surly hit a core with everybody. Once more you made another impact on my life for I quite for 6 months and now I'm struggling all over again. Another job well done 10++++

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Elsa Bennett 02 June 2009

A sad, heartfelt poem here... Wonderful work. Thankyou.

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