Sunday, October 9, 2011

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I'm unstable in the mind,
off the rocker in my head.
And when it comes to crossing lines,
I'd rather just be dead.
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Ellen Rose Kelley
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Stefanie Fontker 09 October 2011

Nice rhyming scheme, you did a good job of it. Interesting concept as well. I wonder what it would be like, if we could really control whether or not we were born. Lovely writing.

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