Thursday, October 16, 2014

Canary Bird Comments

Rating: 3.0

In Riverside, a bird used to live years ago
nearby the only window of his branch,
a big lovely tree, he often sing terrific warbling
rhymed cool songs early in the morn
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Abdullah alHemaidy
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Tajudeen Shah 16 October 2014

dear poet, thank you very much for this welcoming, promising, interesting piece of poetry. For, when started reading, felt like some legend is going to be revealed, but was skeptical looking at the size. but, with such an economy of expression, you have rightly done much justice and extravaganza in depicting and establishing what you intended to; the message, the theme, the soul of imagination, passion, experience, expertise and thoughts. good. please see if you can review my two latest posts here. thanks and rgds.

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