Tuesday, February 14, 2006

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A handsome, male, Canadian Goose
had, since that morning, rather loose
and frequent bouts of very runny......
you know, and no, it wasn't funny
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 14 February 2006

brilliant write, and I'll never look at the canadian geese that fly over my house quite the same way again. -Eila

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Rusty Daily 14 February 2006

This is proof positive that rhyme can be great poetry. Herbert, you are THE MAN. Rusty

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 February 2006

Look, Herbert, some of us are trying to eat our lunch! ! ! Ha ha ha! ! ! 'Gooseshitgreens': hee hee hee! Warmly, G. (I really am in the middle of lunch, though. Home-made muesli) : -)

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Zahraa Song 14 February 2006

BRILLIANT poem if ever! Very funny and kept me enthralled all the way through the poem...This is really an excellent poem....Zainab

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Herbert Nehrlich1 14 February 2006

If my poem held you all the way through it would be like me holding you...: -)) Thanks Best Hx

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