Friday, June 30, 2006

Canadian Girl Comments

Rating: 4.8

Dark clouds had just burst into rain,
I was alone, travelling in the train.
It was just beginning to gain speed,
I had with me Sunday newspaper to read.
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Vikram Aarella - The Poem Shooter
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Omar Ibrahim 16 August 2009

very good....God bless your friendship....

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Jory Walde 06 August 2009

:) such simplicity but real value and meaning

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A . 23 July 2009

Actually it's Kannadian girl not Canadian Girl. :)

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A . 13 January 2009

han bus theek heee han. : -)

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

nice! ! ! the canadian girl made you spend your money -10 anjali

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Amrita Navneet 09 July 2008

i liked it keep it on

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Malini Kadir 27 March 2008

Her father was Scottish and mother Hungarian But she considered herself as a proud Canadian. We talked our way through the long journey On drinks, it was my turn to spend money....these lines says it all! nice read! entertaining!

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K. V. Venkataramana 03 March 2008

Dear Mr Vikram, Your poem 'Canadian Girl' touched me with its sincerity and craftmanship. Please dont be after ratings by fellow poets. My words speak all.

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Abigail Keller 09 July 2006

Such a sweet and tender poem! Kind of strokes my patriotic heart too :) ~Amber~

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Preeti - is here! 08 July 2006

insight into a few moments of ur life? good rhymes! Preeti

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WELL EXPRESSED PIECE...A FINELY LINED TASTE OF POETRY & PROSE COMBINED...INTRUIGING & QUITE SKILLED...(10) FRANK/FJR

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Michael Gale 04 July 2006

A very good poem. God bless thee-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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Nalini Hebbar 30 June 2006

canadian...indian...american...pakistani...all humans...have fun...love...nalini

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