Dark clouds had just burst into rain,
I was alone, travelling in the train.
It was just beginning to gain speed,
I had with me Sunday newspaper to read.
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nice! ! ! the canadian girl made you spend your money -10 anjali
Her father was Scottish and mother Hungarian But she considered herself as a proud Canadian. We talked our way through the long journey On drinks, it was my turn to spend money....these lines says it all! nice read! entertaining!
Dear Mr Vikram, Your poem 'Canadian Girl' touched me with its sincerity and craftmanship. Please dont be after ratings by fellow poets. My words speak all.
Such a sweet and tender poem! Kind of strokes my patriotic heart too :) ~Amber~
WELL EXPRESSED PIECE...A FINELY LINED TASTE OF POETRY & PROSE COMBINED...INTRUIGING & QUITE SKILLED...(10) FRANK/FJR
canadian...indian...american...pakistani...all humans...have fun...love...nalini
very good....God bless your friendship....