Can You Take It In Comments

To endure the muse of life. Nice work.

I feel bad commenting this with the comments below being so good. A very good and creative poem. I liked the pauses you made. Good Writing!

Very creative writing...feel like I was eavesdropping on a secret conversation!

Liliana dear this poem is quite amazing, could be overwheming if written for a special one. Hope he can take it. You said it so well for most of us it's hard to take all the truth in still, we must find and tell it anyway.