Friday, October 7, 2005

Can You Spare A Dime? Comments

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Oh Bro, can you spare a dime?
I need to get some soup and bread
to feed my brain so it can rhyme
there is a glut inside my head
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 08 October 2005

It's definitely 'food for thought' Herbert. Poets get hungrier I'm sure, I always have to grab a snack when my mind is working overtime. Sincerely Ernestine

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Mary Nagy 08 October 2005

You could never be one of those 'starving poets' Herbert. You could make a killing on the street selling poems about people off the top of your head...you have such a talent for that quick thought. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 07 October 2005

Nice write....I like the lines: but poets in their heads are gluttons we give and take from this great earth We are and we do.

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