Tuesday, June 3, 2008

Can You See What You Done To Me Now? Comments

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My dreams are fading into the mist of your avengeful, unforgiving clouds,
They hide my feelings and crush them,
So easy, with so little effort,
You sorround my heart with your tentacles of hate,
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Benjamin O'Brien
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sam wilkinson 11 June 2008

hello i love this poem it is very interesting i can not explain it it seemed as if when i read it i coud actually see it happen! ! ! !

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Elizabeth Douglas 08 June 2008

That is an amazingly detailed poem. They way you write is eloquent and moving. Keep it up! !

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