Can You See What You Done To Me Now? Poem by Benjamin O'Brien

Can You See What You Done To Me Now?



My dreams are fading into the mist of your avengeful, unforgiving clouds,
They hide my feelings and crush them,
So easy, with so little effort,
You sorround my heart with your tentacles of hate,
They are black with anger,
Your grip tightens and I feel a sharp pain,
I feel it bursting from the inside,
Blood leaks from a small hole,
The heart almost deflates,
Pouring my blood, my love everywhere,
Can you see what you done to me now?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sam wilkinson 11 June 2008

hello i love this poem it is very interesting i can not explain it it seemed as if when i read it i coud actually see it happen! ! ! !

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Elizabeth Douglas 08 June 2008

That is an amazingly detailed poem. They way you write is eloquent and moving. Keep it up! !

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Benjamin O'Brien

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