Sunday, July 18, 2010

Can You See The Wind? Comments

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Can you see the wind?
What color is it's hair?
When the oak tree's branch it bends,
Is it dark or is it fair?
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Juan Olivarez
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I can see the wind in your poem.

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Jaana Takalo 18 July 2010

I like the image this poem paints. You're good with words. :)

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