Can You See Me, Please? Comments

Realization comes and I understand who I am now, a confused soul whose time has come to go away. A celestial light falls on to me like at a theater show, waiting to take me away after farewells I say. my pondering will not get me anywhere.. i should have lived m y life in a better way..... so many realizations at the end. beauiful poem. thanky ou dear poetess. tony

thank you all, yes it is from a chapter of my life George, thanks for the insight :)

Hello Again Renu, I read your` your` poem which I found so very deep, and so profound! A poem from the heart and mind caring for those one leaves behind. Influenced by your` husbands` loss? is what, to my mind comes across. I shall read more. Well Done

this is the picture of a debris, a disparage....you depicted them greatly...

A really great poem, a fantastic write, like it.