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Beautifully, and sensitively written Valerie, I felt quite emotional reading it... Very deep thinking but so true of the simple beauty of life. Pat Northall

We spend too much time caught up in our supperficial realty, that we miss these more important matters of life, that you have so eloquently outlined here, open our Real-Eyes......

Valerie, to what wondrous experiences, you take us along! This is a gem of a write! !

I have not seen this triplet type structure, taking use through each of our senses! Like how it reads/ works. A well thought out, clever poem, (and 'can you smell' would not have worked lol)

This is a really lovely poem.

WOW! What a wonderful sweet poem it is! I enjoy thoroughly!

The metaphors were well worked with an eerie silence behind them which added to the effect and message of this poem. Well done.

The sweet, nearly magical delicacy of your wording is a joy to behold-so good

I am really enjoying your work. This is another fine piece.

wow.... i think that sums it all...

keep making those sparks!

images of augmented reality; you relate them and puzzle is complete...beautiful work done! ! !

A really great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Angels Of Peace.