Thursday, December 19, 2013

Can You Promise? Comments

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Can you promise that I will be remembered?
That the world will shed a tear
When it realizes there’s no more Fiona,
That she no longer lives here?
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Fiona Schwartzinoff
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Melissa Robinson 05 January 2014

This poem reminds me of my old friend that just committed suicide....It's very good..

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Fiona Schwartzinoff 19 December 2013

I am not in that open boat. But thinking about what I may leave behind is a bit overwhelming. That's my reason for this poem. Thanks for your sweet words!

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Lyn Paul 19 December 2013

So many think that no ones cares yet sadly it is only because we are all so wrapped up in our own crazy lives. We all have to say goodbye but how do we prepare for this. I certainly hope that you are not in that open boat. Thank you so much Fiona. I wish you hope.

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