Can You Make Me Believe? Comments

This is much the best of yours that I've read so far, probably becuase it comes out of your own experience and feelings and doesn't read like a re-hash of the Romantics. One suggestion: change your offering to you offer unless you feel this makes the rhythm too obvious.

A lovely poem, much can be shown with a look or a smile, often no need for words...lovely 10

When i was twenty two! 'yes'

Much can be spoken in silence. Your last lines are especially poignant.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

A really beautifully love poem Wendy, terrific write. Best wishes, Andrew

Lovely words from a lovely lady, keep writing. Bob

a song romantic and arousing...sensually appealing to mind... well done

I do not need to say I love you! Can you not see love light in mine eyes? The windows of my soul, I cannot disguise As I listen to your voice, I hang on to every word its the sweetest music that I have ever heard As I gently touch your face, forces come to play As beautiful as a mountain stream up on a summers day My breathing is so shallow I can feel your body heat In unison together my heart takes up the beat No words that I can utter none wrote that's so divine Is the look of love, from a man, a love such as mine. Lovely poem Wendy, sorry i got inspired!