Friday, May 9, 2014

Can You Listen To My Cry? Comments

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Still I aspire to live in this earth
But not with this burning pain
Of the loss of my love.
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Amitava Sur
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Kirti Sharma 31 May 2014

So difficult it becomes when living without the one we love...

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Akhtar Jawad 13 May 2014

An impressive and touching poem, .

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Roseann Shawiak 10 May 2014

I have listened to your cry, Amitava, it is heart breaking. In spite of grief's sorrow, you still want to live on this earth. Your poem resonates with your emptiness and still you want to continue being here, a hope in your heart to hold on. Tender, raw emotion touches the heart. Wonderful poem, expressing your sorrow. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur

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