Friday, April 21, 2006

Can You Imagine? Comments

Rating: 3.4

A sky that’s not blue,
A dog with no tail,
A lie that is true,
A sea with no whale.
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>Starr Williams<
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Panda 16 April 2021

I loved it!

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Duncan Wyllie 09 July 2006

If you can then you can write from a source of imagination, you did it, and you did it well Love duncan X

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Dustin Bennefield 08 July 2006

A pic. that grabs the corners of your mind and shows you ' what if? ' Perfect. ~Inkweaver

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Ernestine Northover 06 July 2006

This definitely stirs the imagination Starr, cleverly put together nice rhyming too. Love Ernestine XXX

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Brian Dorn 16 June 2006

Starr, a lot of strange/absurd images leading to an ending that makes perfect sense of it all... well done! Brian

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Lisa Wilkinson 13 May 2006

I love this poem and rated it deservingly. Thanks for your messages Starr. You are so young yet so talented. Isnt it amazing how our feelings are expressed? I will keep you on my list to check out.bye for now, x

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>Starr Williams<

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