A sky that’s not blue,
A dog with no tail,
A lie that is true,
A sea with no whale.
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If you can then you can write from a source of imagination, you did it, and you did it well Love duncan X
A pic. that grabs the corners of your mind and shows you ' what if? ' Perfect. ~Inkweaver
This definitely stirs the imagination Starr, cleverly put together nice rhyming too. Love Ernestine XXX
Starr, a lot of strange/absurd images leading to an ending that makes perfect sense of it all... well done! Brian
I love this poem and rated it deservingly. Thanks for your messages Starr. You are so young yet so talented. Isnt it amazing how our feelings are expressed? I will keep you on my list to check out.bye for now, x
I loved it!