Sunday, July 28, 2013

Can You Hold An Ocean? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look into my eyes
But hold her hand
With a laugh and giggle
Moving closer
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Autumn Winds
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Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

It's a pleasure to read this gem of a piece! I have you But can I keep an ocean like you? Wild and untamed Fluid and ever-moving Fantastic thought of a bewildered lover, you take the reader with your musings... But if she survives Will I? ...My God! What a difficult question uttered so easily! Well done,10/10

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