Saturday, June 3, 2006

Can You Hear Me Now Comments

Rating: 4.8

MUSICAL laugh, blind man bluff,
a malicious smile, with spectacles
coming from the north, west, south,
oh regal spirit with spider web
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 30 September 2006

Hi David, It sound like a bluff. Oh well, Excellent poem creative.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 June 2006

Could this be the pied piper himself coming to town, lots in this a feeling of caution also Thankyou David Love Duncan

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***** ********* 03 June 2006

An interesting write, lots of images to dwell on. Tai

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Goldy Locks 03 June 2006

i'm picturing the sights fathered by the great tune: Southern Cross by CSNY. nice write, David.

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