Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Can You Hear? Can You Feel? Comments

Rating: 3.6

I held my tears
in my palms
I saw the light as they
swam from my skin
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Kasia Fedyk
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Sina Farajzadeh 23 September 2012

A great rhetorical question at the end. Who knows? A powerful imagination and emotion in the first stanza. Like it.

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Heather Wilson 20 September 2012

Wish I knew the answer to the last verse Kasia, a really thoughtful touching poem,

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

Can you hear? Can you feel? very beautiful.. touching.. read my poem Can you not see?

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Valerie Dohren 17 September 2012

Beautiful write Kasia, ending with a thought-provoking question.

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Meera Panigrahi 15 September 2012

lovely poem defying age

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 September 2012

Had everyone been feeling everything, there would not have been special persons in life.There won`t have been words like unique as is this poem...great write

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Payal Parande 12 September 2012

do you know who you are mam... every beautiful thing that can be think that is what you are incredible poem......... love you, payal

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Neela Nath Das 11 September 2012

So nice poem. A great mind thinks great. Very profound and philosophical subject-matter, Kasia.

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