~ Can You Guide Me? ~ [22 Words Poetry] Comments

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Kee Thampi To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 9/29/2012 11: 40: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ---------- dearest poetess never write like this Not on My Own Cremation! ! be with good mind kee == Posted thro’ kindness of AB London

Great canvas Novel thought Deep impact on 'going-to-die' persons specially in west Congrat for foresight in poetic format...10++

Out of desperation in materialistic Western Life Style and Mind Set this poem got momentum And it'll surely swell like snowball in psyche of Empty-Nest-Syndrome in West India has not reached to that scale yet...may be gasping to reach there as blindly we're becoming 'Copy-Cat' of West Good Poem a bonk [hit hard] to consumerist society Thanks sharing...10+

It is not light reading poem Mr. Bagchi rightly pointed out concern about funeral in west... Serious poem indeed please ponder readers what poet written in 'white-Ink'

Indeed so it is needed As in West funeral and coffin charges and costs too high And going-die persons are anxious about it Good contemplative poem Others may look in diluted form... But I see in this canvas...good poem for the elderly..must be ten plus plus

Ha ha ha...Knows who...if one knows...how one will guide...good pun 10

Wow...Great one in short...funny..and enjoying Regards ~ niv

I say Bejesus, ah, golly, by Jove, geez Thro' all these I express my utter surprise for such unconventional poem... Never read such before Offs Sure ten

yours always nice poem to ponder..10 do it your self if you can. add numbers and make ten think leisurely and then

God is always ready to guide u and he is the best guide. a nice confession.

a thinking unexpected way, the reading much relished

I love your critical mind and your very strong way of expressing your thoughts. Fantastic poetry in a very special style Excellent. I am happy to see you writing new poems again

I am always pleased to read the poems of any person whose message to me begins with, 'I have read your poem (name) , (comment) and I would like you to read mine.' It is only gracious to request a reading after having also read anothers. Thank you. Adeline

The laziness of modern life and how easy it is get confused are things that come to mind when reading this shor piece so well executed. Well done.

Nice short poem, Nivedita! I like it more soever for it compactness of thought, even in such short verses. Thank you for sharing ~Besa

Wow! ! Great one...cute on lighter side/ in shade tenner thanks sharing