Thursday, August 2, 2007

Can You Give Without Taking More? Comments

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My mind has been pulled apart
I have been dragged too and fro
Talked to many who just want release
Does it matter how I feel?
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Alison Smith
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Alison Cassidy 16 August 2007

Perhaps all you need is an ear that is prepared to listen. Really listen too, without needing to offer advice or rabbiting on about personal problems. I do believe we should all be given lessons in saying 'NO'. An interesting poem about a timeless subject. love, Allie xxxx

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Louise Bloom 05 August 2007

love the poem it is so true i can totally relate all of your poems are good lou

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Marcia Morris 03 August 2007

This poem ask a good question, people are always taking but never giving. I feel this write for now I say 'It's my turn ' my turn to release my stress on somebody, my turn to take....lol lol, Nice write

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