Saturday, August 4, 2018

Can You Be Mine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can I ever get those red
Lips and fluttering eyes of thine
Can I even put soft kisses
On them and take them as mine
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Aqua Flower 04 August 2018

A very nice write about the yearning for love. Love to turn your life into a sweet rhapsody! Nice! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 August 2018

I am glad you liked it and for lovely comment. Thanks very much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 August 2018

Can I play with your hair/Getting lost in it sweet fragrance/Can I hold you in my/Tight embrace and we both dance...........a beautiful romantic poem! (10)

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 August 2018

Thanks very much Sir for support. My regards.

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