Can You... Comments
Can you take me away dissolve these walls that contain me
lets plan an escape an than turn our fantasy to reality...
can you diminish the pain that seems relentless to leave my soul
can you do the job that no alchol or drug could do an make me feel whole...
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Can you feel it. My mind is in a poetic meter. Nice, troublesome. Your opening lines reveal a longing to become detached from a confinement you will not allow. Can you...feel it. My mind is in a poetic meter.
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7/27/2025 6:56:54 PM # 1.0.0
A very well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the poetry world, talent! Thanks for sharing, Love and Peace for always!