Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Can You? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Can you,
Undo,
what you have done, ,
with me,
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Sahar Sahar
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Asma Khan 03 September 2009

In a short poem deep emotions are penned. Great!

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

a deep poem! in few lines you could show your feelings. I loved the description.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

my sinless person, To prove my innocence, To unbdo, Your sins..what a pain and anguish inthe poem. i am stunned to note all the sufferings under gone by individual to prove the hoesty.... well done and keep hw work up.....10 read mien no to violence... step mother and forgiveness

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ata khan 03 September 2009

Nice short poem, says a lot. thanks for sharing

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Black & White Right 03 September 2009

I loved every line of this piece. Thank you...

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