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In a short poem deep emotions are penned. Great!

a deep poem! in few lines you could show your feelings. I loved the description.

my sinless person, To prove my innocence, To unbdo, Your sins..what a pain and anguish inthe poem. i am stunned to note all the sufferings under gone by individual to prove the hoesty.... well done and keep hw work up.....10 read mien no to violence... step mother and forgiveness

Nice short poem, says a lot. thanks for sharing

I loved every line of this piece. Thank you...