Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Can You... Comments

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Make my black roses turn red?
Fill me with the love that makes me shiver?
Touch me with the hands of an angel?
Kiss me with the lips of a lover?
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Natasha Dowdy
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strong is this addressed to death or a lover? ?

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Musical Notes 12 September 2009

can you.... a very emotional piece indeed.... short in length but long in expression

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Keith Hendrickson 09 September 2009

i love this one. short and sweet does it sometimes.4sure 4sure. fill me with love that makes me shiver... i really love that line. great writing i cant wait to read more

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