Monday, December 8, 2008

Can You..... Comments

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Can you love me for real?
For real I mean for the person I am,
The real person I am not the woman of your imagination
Can you....can you just love me for being me...
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Nomthi Lusiti
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Kefentse Sathekge 15 December 2008

simple but effective. i love your style of writting.

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 13 December 2008

Nomthi - A great concept, but minimize your words, making each one carry more weight. Best wishes - Cheryl

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 December 2008

This is a great concept. But u could have expressed it more succinctly. Yet it is wonderful poem........Please take a look at my poem BEAUTY.(which touches only one aspect of this poem)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 December 2008

Love comes naturally................when both party agree.Excellent writes Zoleka.

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Nomthi Lusiti

Nomthi Lusiti

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