Sunday, April 27, 2008

Can You? Comments

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can you love me
can you mend my broken heart
can you be there when i break down
can you be my support when i stumble
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christopher murphy
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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Love the continue use of can you..... Format brilliant. Makes the reader feel your anxiety... Brilliant and unique

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

i really hope someone can do that for you...great job

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Mamta Agarwal 27 April 2008

its a cry of every heart. but the truth is we cannot depend on anybody but ourselves. the longing for someone who will always be there for you has been nicely captured in your poem.

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christopher murphy

christopher murphy

nottingham
christopher murphy
christopher murphy
nottingham
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