Saturday, November 27, 2010

Can You Comments

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Can you look me in the eyes.
Can you tell me you love me.
Can you say it over and over again.
Can you really say it and mean it.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Derek Haughton 31 March 2014

A poem, that is it shows the obsessive nature of love and insecurity rather than telling the reader 'I'm obsessed and insecure though I love deeply.' as so many on this site do. One of my own obsessions is (to should be too in the fourth last line) proof reading!

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