Tuesday, November 21, 2006

Can We Shake Ourselves Awake Comments

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Can we shake ourselves awake,
From an aborted ride into darkness
Derailed?
Can we take back the hope to love,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Tahnee ? ? ? 22 November 2006

To let someone we felt we knew take the wheel. Awakening to find they had become misguided! awesome poem, and awesome line.

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David Gerardino 21 November 2006

drugged realities sold as we slept, great line, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , one of your best...10

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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