Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Can We Have It Without The End? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our friendship started with hello and hi
hope it does not end with bye
u encircled my day with divine light
Ghostly weapon never become an issue to fight
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rakesh rampariya
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Poetheart Morgan 05 October 2012

I love this poem. Always re-reading! ! ! The end sometimes is necessary, but so sad, friendly Poel! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 23 September 2012

Love, finally! ! ! Beautiful!

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Kasia Fedyk 13 August 2012

Beautiful Divine poem Rakesh!

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Kristina B; Williams 18 June 2009

CAN WE HAVE IT WITHOUT END, I GAVE YOU N THE POEM A 10

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Merna Ibrahim 05 January 2009

fantastic title.I really like it!

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

lines talking frank...good piece...good rhyming...well done, Rakesh...

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

slowly you stepped in my life like rising sun n filled it with frolic n fun good lines. and you are such a good friend to me and I am sure many others. good job. your friend, Becca

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Mrs.Joseph =) 18 December 2008

Nice poem! I like the meaning. You and another friend on here of mine both have poems that relate to me! You also sound like a good poet

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