Can We Build A Future? Poem by DM W

Can We Build A Future?

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O can we build a future from the fractured past?
Can we transfigure these precious present moments
Into a blazing light of hope: that can nobly
Guide these current times and the coming centuries?

Sunday, June 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: future
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 07 June 2020

we can do everything we can enlighten our world by the peaceful light for all but for this welfare doing- we need to change our mind, we need to change our inside-outside, we need to work together.............

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Shaun Cronick 07 June 2020

Dominic another well written and beautifully presented train of hopeful and yearning thought poem. A clarion call to today's society.Sometimes we do learn from history and other times when we can don't, we get it so wrong.10++ and thank you for sharing your thought-provoking poem. Take care.

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Dominic Windram 09 June 2020

Thanks guys I always appreciate your kind and perceptive comments. It makes it worthwile to keep on submitting poems believe me!

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