Tuesday, December 20, 2016

Can We Be The Only Race? Comments

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Can We Be The Only Race?

Can we be the only race?
Is there something else in space
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Annette Aitken
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Bri Edwards 28 March 2017

i'm about to put this into April 2017's showcase, but i have a question/comment. Can we be the only race? in the vastness of this empty space or many worlds of awesome wonder planets orb in a different colour.................or many worlds OR of many worlds? i don't know. please tell me. ............................................................But, for now, i'll use it as is. thanks. except: i'll change they to the in the last line. ;) :) have a nice day! aren't angels celestial beings? i never saw one before i found Annette's photo on PH. bri :)

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Seamus O Brian 21 December 2016

To stand on this tiny crumb of sand and gaze into the vastness of the universe. You ask the questions that well up in anyone's heart who peers into the depths of the night sky and feels a shiver of loneliness. Love the jaunty pace and colorful visuals. Lovely work, Annette. and perhaps we will one day see the angels who fill the sky with their dancing and realize we were never alone.... :)

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Bill Cantrell 21 December 2016

Dimensions, doors, questions within questions within questions. Design stands as a witness which reguardless of countless interpretations cannot be denied, peering into space we see an endless void filled with matter, what we used to think were stars we found to be galaxies, trillions and there just seems to be more and more and more. A great poem demanding questions of balance to be answered.

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Annette Aitken 21 December 2016

Thanks Bill for your unwavering support... ;)

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2016

There are other spirits out there! ! Surely are not alone. However, We are the kind called 'Human Beings. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Annette Aitken 21 December 2016

Its nice to think that we are not alone..thanks Edward

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