Tuesday, June 9, 2009

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Can u see the pain that cuts her deep
Can u feel her struggles that cause misery

If you cared you'd pay attention
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Lechelle Jones (01.24.91,D.C)
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Deborah Cromer 16 June 2009

Writing poetry comes with a price. We get our material and information from our feelings. Some of the experiences we have, we use bits and pieces to make a whole. You seem to have a pretty good idea on how to write to get people to listen. Deborah Cromer

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

yes, there are things you can't see but i can..there are also many things i could see but you can't..so always think twice..grace

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Kayla Daley 13 June 2009

you might want to go back and correct spelling This poem is sad but i like it

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Rae Sinclair 13 June 2009

wow, i really love this poem. it's so insightful and can tell an actual story.

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