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Writing poetry comes with a price. We get our material and information from our feelings. Some of the experiences we have, we use bits and pieces to make a whole. You seem to have a pretty good idea on how to write to get people to listen. Deborah Cromer

yes, there are things you can't see but i can..there are also many things i could see but you can't..so always think twice..grace

you might want to go back and correct spelling This poem is sad but i like it

wow, i really love this poem. it's so insightful and can tell an actual story.