I said loudly "yes, yes and yes "
Might not be heard by her with trace..
I was all along whispering too
My god I was in love and that was true
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Interesting Analysis Michael De La Fuente1 hour ago As Sanyati mentioned below, it was a bit off rhyme yet portrayed the suspenseful thought clearly. Keep writing fellow poet; the more profound it will be once you get real deep. Comment +1 lovable Bhupathi Prabhakara Rao1 hour ago lovely Comment +1 Okay Sanyati Higgins2 hours ago The repetitiveness and off-rhymes left me a bit confused, but the basic meaning of the poem got through.
Ram Nath likes this. Ram Nath Atiuttam..............Wahhhhhhhhhhh..........//Where is need to confess? When it is reflected on face Face shines with little of your appearance I take it one in million chances 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1