Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Can This Be Love? Comments

Rating: 3.5

I watch you across the room
Thinking your gorgeous

longing to approach you
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2018

I had a typo in my comment, Heather, that must be DESIRE. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2018

This could be love, sure. I have enjoyed the way you built up this gorgeous poem, WOW! Tender sweetest words, but filled with true desore for love, very romantic, Heather! A 10 and much much more.

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 10 September 2013

Attraction fools us sometimes until we feel the burning of our hearts. Nice poem

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Sallam Yassin 07 September 2013

when you are not certain and in doubt that is what the love is all about/ bright

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013

Wow, A Romantic poem with a lovely flow...Love the way you picturised it beautifully.Loved reading it.

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Queeny Gona 06 September 2013

Very passionate write dear ma' am and i loved each and every line of this muse for thebeauty of its expression in mesmirizing words.

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Jodie Hardy 05 September 2013

Ooh I hope so, how wonderrful to love so passionately. Good write x x

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David Wood 05 September 2013

This is how I felt about my late wife. Lovely poem.

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Valsa George 04 September 2013

Oh! Highly romantic! Yea, it makes one smile! !

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 September 2013

Absolutely, this is real love. So exciting to read, it is simply so beautiful, it makes one smile just imagining it. Amazing write.

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