Thursday, January 21, 2010

Can'T You See? Comments

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Can't you see what you've done for me,
The happiness and joy, It's you that set me free.
You took the little love I had and made it all that it could be.
Yet you push me away thinking you don't make me happy,
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Joseph Cuevas
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Rachael Curtis 22 February 2010

This is so lovely and very sweet. You work in emotion very well and its a very pleasant thing to read. It reminds me of just how nice love can be =) I hope this girl realises just how much you love her!

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Carly Hedlund 11 February 2010

Awwww..... That was so sweet. Whoever she is she's really lucky to have your love.

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Twilight Whispers 02 February 2010

That's so honest and beautiful (: You have talent so keep working on it!

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Joseph Cuevas

Joseph Cuevas

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