Thursday, January 26, 2012

Can'T Think, How To Call This Comments

Rating: 4.5

Uh-hmm its so sweet so nice
It smothers soul, it clouds my eyes
I want not lose and neither to mess
an inch of fiber that makes its strings
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Victor Ogoti
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John Carse 27 January 2012

Thank you for your kind words. I really liked this. Very concise and precise, the way poems should be. Well done and kind regards.

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