Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Can'T Stop Me Leaving Comments

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Take me away,
To a valley away.
Take me from here,
To a place I can think.
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Brianna Wilshusen
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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

An interesting story. The rhymes are just Ok. There aren't all that many. There is a bit of a flow at times but not enough of one. All in all. I would say an average poem with a good story. GW62

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