Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Can'T Not Cry Comments

Rating: 4.0

Mouth filled with so much salt
These tears might as well come from my tongue.
I'm sorry, I can't not cry.
It makes me form and takes the form of bitter, ugly words
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Annie Jane
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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

vivid imagery and flowing links. every line has it's weight.

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